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Post by venome »

Excellent work! No suggestions sorry :)
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Post by wysmommy »

Thanks guys. :cheers:

What if I keep the "Watch it Anytime" text, but leave off the vines? Is that better, or should I add back the vines? I don't have a preference so I will go with what you guys prefer.

Thanks for the font suggestion Tim. The more I look at the new font for the review, the more I like it. Great idea. :thumb:

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Post by Arkflip »

How about this?

• Remove the text and the banner and seal the pic row with the digital copy bar. With that you'll have a lot more of free space to let the back more smooth.
• Doing the above you will have more space for the synopsis and the quote, allowing you to have a bit more space between the quote and the synopsis. Then adjust the leading between the quote lines reducing a bit the space.

I hope this can help :)
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Post by wysmommy »

Is this better?

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Post by JollyRoger »

It works for me!!! :D :D
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Post by M0vieM0nster »

I prefered the old stone texture :P
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Post by Zungam »

Yeah, personally I think post #152 was spot on Mumz! It's busy, but it fits the movie and MM's smashing front.
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Post by wysmommy »

Just trying out all the suggestions. Here is the original stone texture, and a thin brown banner in between them. Any better, or do you still prefer post #152?

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Post by M0vieM0nster »

You could try a slab in between as it is like the ones dor disc 1 & 2 etc for the watch it anytime text?
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Post by Bunny Dojo »

As long as you're open to removing the "Watch it anytime" text, maybe you could shrink that entire bar down to just a few pixels tall and then utilize that extra space up top to give your synopsis and quote even more breathing room?

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