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If you think this looks better ... :whistle:

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That does look good!
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I agree but not really sure the stroke on the text of the synopsis and quote is working all that great, also I would think about taking the bottom end still of the 2 cars out and moving your special features into that box and making it look like a computer screen display that fits the style of the ones in the movie.
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Gentlemen, decide for something specific, I do not know anymore what to do...
Monitors will be suspended whether in the panorama?
Special featuress are to be on the screen monitor?
And what with the synopsis because I do not quite understand? :(
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They're just suggestions for ideas that might work mate, that's all, as for the synopsis it looks to me like you have a stroke on the text, and if so I just think you don't really need it, just my humble opinion nothing more, in the end you do what you like and what you think is best and what you are happy with :)
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It may in this way? I'm just not sure about the quote on the left side of the Willa.

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I like it! :D :D
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JollyRoger wrote:
QUOTE (JollyRoger @ Nov 18 2013, 04:54 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I like it! :D :D

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Is this font TT will be better? Maybe you have any other suggestions?

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I liked the previous better!!
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