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Maybe if remove the smoke and make it from scratch alone would be much better. :chin: For example brushes.

Besides great! :thumb:
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Don't you need a quotation mark in the end of the quote? I know some newspapers don't give a shijt and print quotes with only the quotation mark in the begining.
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JollyRoger wrote:
QUOTE (JollyRoger @ Nov 4 2013, 08:50 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Don't you need a quotation mark in the end of the quote? I know some newspapers don't give a shijt and print quotes with only the quotation mark in the begining.


Not necessarily. You probably refers to an element that, in newspaper design, is called "eye" (at least in Brazil, I am translating the exact term in our language.) To use or not two quotations marks is a matter of graphic design in this case, not grammar.
I let my students free to choose, so long as they respect their choice in the rest of the project (in caseof citations in the main text, the two quotation marks are mandatory)
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Almost done?

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I'd remove hyphenate from the synopsis. I don't like the words beingcut in half. :)
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Do not give up the smoke. It's as easy things are, and you will be pleased with the result as you do this alone. ;)
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Great one my friend :D
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Looks good :)
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