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xshoty
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Zungam wrote:
QUOTE (Zungam @ Nov 7 2013, 02:14 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
That was a funny sentence :giggle:

Google Translate treats you badly sometimes my friend :)


Yup i do agree :giggle:

But it's ok i'm make this too :lolboard:
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Great second take on this! Keep it up!
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Much better idea to work on ;)
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End of jokes! :bottom: Write me here, whether that's better! Nothing is not yet cut out. :P

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Cool layout - minus the satellite.
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venome wrote:
QUOTE (venome @ Nov 8 2013, 10:07 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Cool layout - minus the satellite.

:agree:
It's all uphill til you get to the top
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I like it all, but black levels should be deeper
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Post by M0vieM0nster »

JollyRoger wrote:
QUOTE (JollyRoger @ Nov 8 2013, 01:47 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I like it all, but black levels should be deeper

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Front and spine ready. Something still to change?

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Post by yesheman »

Cool work! I don't think you need the yellow lines, it draws a bit too much attention. I also think you should get rid of/change the spinepic.. three characters on that little space will not look good when printed.. Stick to just Will or Gene :)
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