Enemy of the State

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For some time think on this project. Unfortunately there is no of quality materials.
Did something will come out of it?

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Post by M0vieM0nster »

Nice start, different but i think it's lacking something to bring it all together, not sure what but if your stuck for resources i have 230 high-res images for this movie
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Nice start! One of my fav movies! :)
A designer knows he has achieved perfection - not when there's nothing left to add - but when there's nothing left to take away

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Great , but i think your front is too charged reduce some effect maybe focus a bit more on will smith !
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Post by Zungam »

Looks like it says "Slate" and not "State" imo. I'm not completely sold on your front, but xShoty's suggestion might help :)
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I do see that Will Smith is on the run from somebody, but with his underpants and gown, he looks unintentionally hilarious to me. A picture with his lawsuit would be more appropriate, I think.
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:chin:
It's hard for me to understand what you write ...

In short, I have to focus on the main character Will Smith. That I understand. But I can not understand how you can give a "talking heads" to an action movie? I wanted in order to action was at the front. Why Will fleeing from the death looks ridiculous? :shrug:

Must I think ...

PS: Request to MM. How have Smith in good quality - please send. :cry:
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It's his clothes that look ridiculous to me: underpanties and that gown (sort of a cape).
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:iamwithstupid:
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Maybe this arrangement on the front? Nothing is not yet cut out.

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