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Loving this bud
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Will this be a traditional blu-ray case, or will this be a special packaging design to hold all of the discs?
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It will be traditonal case. (but it should be a 6 disc version too)

Here's a little update.

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I think season one is done. What do you think?

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The top half of the back seems kind of bland compared to the bottom, why not include a character composition? :)
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The big stills and a character composition is too much I think, maybe a space scene with the ship or something.
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Great work, you're on your way to another unbelievable set! :)

I'm not usually one to mention bar codes, but that would be one way of potentially tightening things up on the top half of the back, adding weight without drawing attention. (Alternatively, you could add a strip of that rock/metal texture, but you probably have the perfect amount of it already.) It looks great as it is, and your focus goes right to the star of the show: that fantastic composition of blended images. :cheers:

On the bottom credits, perhaps shift the "Special Features are presented" right a little, and the credits left a little, so that everything lines up?

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(It's a non-issue, but, since you're going to be using the template across such a work-intensive set, I figured it was worth pointing out. :) )
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Thanks Tim!
I consider this barcode thing, because I put the Enterprise on the back, but I think it's little "boring".
The only problem that I didn't use barcode so far, so I don't know what the rules are. :D

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Cirus wrote:
QUOTE (Cirus @ Sep 25 2013, 03:11 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Thanks Tim!
I consider this barcode thing, because I put the Enterprise on the back, but I think it's little "boring".
The only problem that I didn't use barcode so far, so I don't know what the rules are. :D

One thing I like about a bar code is that it breaks up the design a little bit, to prevent things from being straight up and down. For instance, here it would give the synopsis text a bit more shape, rather than just being a perfect, centered block. Here's a rough example of the potential result:

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With that said, if ever there was a cover where it was appropriate to have some open space, this is the one, so either of your other two options seem great to me. :)
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Post by venome »

Love the ship, the synopsis could be a bit shorter which will help. Great back design ;)
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