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I'd like to see him in a grass skirt and some lippy.
Great stuff Z, i think voetz suggestion might be the solution :)
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Thanks for the suggestions guys.

JR: Tried, but think it looks better up top.
Voetz: Will test it and see if it works.
Pyt: Let me see if I get it correct; You mean bend his left arm (our right) slightly so the entire sword is visible? Could do that :)
V: Sure! Although I'm not sure what lippy means? Is that lipstick?

Will work some more with this later tonight :)
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Yes! Something like this:

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Just a small update.

- TT as suggested by voetz, thinking I'm satisfied with it now :)
- Sword in a different angle. Thinking I have to increase the length some.
- More white to the outer frame as suggested by JR (sorry mate, didn't see that post earlier)

Started the spine and back. Many thanks to nikerun for providing med with the back template :cheers:

I'm not sure if the spine works though. Any thoughts?
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Post by JollyRoger »

It doesn't. Work that is. The TT gets completely lost in the purple color tones IMO;)

White spine fading into the more yellow tone around Mr.Carter, there at the bottom. :)
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Post by Paris »

I think if John Carter is in a box on the spine, an all purple background would work? Also I'm eager to see what you do with the back layout! :)
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Already started something else when I saw your suggestion there, Paris. Went with the tower and sky fading into white. Also a couple of aircrafts there which might be hard to see on the preview.
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Could you post a 100% preview of the fade from whitish via purple to yellow please? Seems like you have some text there? Very hard to see in this preview.
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I dont like that tower-whatever-it-is! Lose it! ;)
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