John Carter

Zungam · Post by **Zungam** » Fri Sep 06, 2013 7:40 pm

Zungam wrote:
QUOTE (Zungam @ Sep 3 2013, 05:08 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Deffo underrated, maybe not criminally, but still I enjoyed it quite a lot, and, as proven by (amongst others) Venome and yourself, the design posibilities for this movie is huge.

I feel really bad for not mentioning Nikerun's version, which I love!

Ok, I tried your suggestions Shok. How's it looking now?

venome · Post by **venome** » Fri Sep 06, 2013 10:31 pm

So much better now

ShokXoneStudios · Post by **ShokXoneStudios** » Sat Sep 07, 2013 3:34 am

Much improved. I'd say round out the side of Woola's head (there's a small "lump" on his outline that doesn't look right), then lose the 3D effect on the text, go back to the previous typeface, and try making it the same color as the red border.

Sorry, I probably sound like I'm trying to hijack the whole project. :whistle:

chefjoe · Post by **chefjoe** » Sat Sep 07, 2013 4:21 am

Post by **xshoty** » Sat Sep 07, 2013 6:34 am

Very nice update my friend !!! Cant wait to see the back !!

Post by **JollyRoger** » Sat Sep 07, 2013 9:41 am

I'd like to see more white in the border.

Zungam · Post by **Zungam** » Sat Sep 07, 2013 9:41 am

Thanks guys

ShokXoneStudios wrote:
QUOTE (ShokXoneStudios @ Sep 7 2013, 03:34 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Much improved. I'd say round out the side of Woola's head (there's a small "lump" on his outline that doesn't look right), then lose the 3D effect on the text, go back to the previous typeface, and try making it the same color as the red border.

Sorry, I probably sound like I'm trying to hijack the whole project.

Don't worry, suggestions are what WIP is all about

I think I'll keep the TT in 3D and this font as it fits pretty good imo, but I've changed the color to match the border. Which TT color look best?

Post by **JollyRoger** » Sat Sep 07, 2013 9:44 am

#2, sorry Josh

How would the tagline look at the bottom, a half on each side of his sword? You may have to move everything else a tad upwards to gain the space needed for the tagline at the bottom

voetzoeker · Post by **voetzoeker** » Sat Sep 07, 2013 10:12 am

Great work Z, how about a combination of the 2 ?

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Post by **pytlaczek** » Sat Sep 07, 2013 11:23 am

Now really is nice.
Maybe think about the color combination TT voetzoekera? A you thought in order to bend his hand with a sword, so that you could see the sword? Pants can be copied.

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