John Carter

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Me too this filter it by its solid a little it seems. :P
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I'm sorry, but I didn't understant that sentence pytlaczek.
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On miniature it seems you used a Topaz filter type. If not, if this image so it looks like it accept my apologies. :ashamed:

I am waiting for more :) .
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Ah, now I understand :) Yeah, I've used (among others) a Topaz filter. Personally I don't think the veins are a problem, but for this update they're mostly hidden anyway ;)

I've moved things a little and made the frame wider. Also added the TT. Still need to blend everything in, highlight the characters and fill the empty space on the bottom left and around the "dog" behind Carter.
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Look forward to seeing more Z, no suggestions other than possibly some texture for the TT that would work with the frame and other elements :)
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Can u change the white background with a darker red/brown color? And then maybe a white textured frame? Atm i think there's too much white on the cover. The rest look amazing!
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V: Will test it on the next update.

Felipe: I expected to get a suggestion like that sooner or later ;) Personally I think the white works, and after I've added the last characters and elements, even more white space will be covered. I can try a different outer color/texture though to see if that works, but I don't think a red/brown will do the trick as I fear it will pull to much attention away from the composition.
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Leave the white; Felipe don't know what's he's talking about! :D :D
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Post by ShokXoneStudios »

Some quick thoughts: The placement of Woola behind Carter's arm is very awkward, as is Tars Tarkas riding the beast. I suggest putting Woola in the foreground of the bottom left, with Tars behind him, with the sunset and mountain background leading into the underside of the white ape's chin.
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I agree with Arkflip about the (huge) white boarder. It's not that it doesn't fit the film, I don't think my purple did either, I think it's washing out the color and texture making it feel flat.
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