Undisputed Trilogy

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looking great
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RRJR84 wrote:
QUOTE (RRJR84 @ Aug 23 2013, 12:50 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
looking great this is looking great



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I believe you! I believe you! :D :D :D


that was a total mess up :giggle:
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Unbelievable great ;)
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stripped everything back and hopefully the the color tones are better now. Working on the back will post a preview soon.

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Great job, V! :) Two suggestions. How would the character on the far left look with strong specular highlights in his eyes like the other characters? And I also think the tagline should include periods, for example: Honor. Redemption. Freedom. :D
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Will try that thanks nike
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Tagline does look better. I agree with Paris on the periods. Here they wil make an impact on the tagline.

Only thing I'm not so keen on is the stance of Snipes; can you turn him a tiny bit, so he looks like he's standing upright, instead of hunching forward/to the side as he is now?
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Aint seen any of the films so ill ask, are they the main actors from each of the three films?

Have you tried shrinking the middle dude so all three of the top of their heads are in a straight line
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Coming along great!
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