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Hi. :)

My next one will be Oblivion. I know, the front is nothing special.

[attachment=26473:Oblivion_BD.jpg]


I've tryed an other Bubbleship in the background but the one from the image just looks better.
Today i found another one. Maybe i'll try this one, too.
This white "whatever" in Tom's left hand i'll try to remove.

Also i'm not sure about the tagline font. I don't know which one to use. :shrug:
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Nice start! The image looks great but the text can use some work. The first part of the tagline shouldn't be in italics for starters.
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Love the start on this one..
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Great imagery. Maybe a bolder tagline font would look good blended into the background somehow?
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Long time ago since I started this one...
I didn't like it anymore so I started a new try.

[attachment=28356:Front.jpg]

There is still some work to do, of course. I'll add one ore two more ships and the statue is still to do (make her look older etc.). And I'll add these little ships (Bubbleships?) between the two waterfalls I think.
Maybe I'll add some more buildings of New York in the background (if I'll get it done...). But I'm not sure about this because the Empire State Building is one of the biggest there and it's very small on the cover. So the others would maybe be to small. I've used these images (and some more) to put the landscape together:

[attachment=28357:Showcase.jpg]

It took me very much time to do this, so I hope you like it. And if not, I'll start again... :whistle:
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10 times better than your first front! :)
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I like it so much but the liberty statue is not in the movie its not bad just atought :)
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Thx guys. :)

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QUOTE (xshoty @ Feb 24 2014, 07:13 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I like it so much but the liberty statue is not in the movie its not bad just atought :)



Yes she is (a part of her at least):

[attachment=28358:Comparison.jpg]

But you're right, not in the pose I've used her. I've tryed the Empire State Building there first. But I don't get it done well.
So I've used the Statue of Liberty instead. Is it a problem?
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No its not a problem m8, why not use them its a custom coveer :) By the way your deffo on the good track cant wait to see the next update :D
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Maybe just have the head or torch coming out of the ground. I'd soften the contrast of the rocks and the character slightly so it blends better :)
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