The Dark Knight Rises

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I think the tagline on the back would look better if you removed the horisontal one, put emphasis on the angled one that follows the rest of the text/layout. Just suggestion here :)

The rest looks smashing IMO ;)
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Was just gonna suggest that. And maybe decrease the font size of the synopsis a bit so it doesn't feel so cramped?
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Good points. Great work again m8 ;)
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Worked on the back side of Rises. Also matched up the spines. Think this set is practically good to go now.

Although they share the same kind of template, I've gone for a slightly different theme with each: the orange 'sunrise' tone and the bats rising for Begins, the colourful theme and playing cards for Dark Knight, and the desaturated tones for Rises, with the rubble.

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outstanding skills jw :) ....a quick question about the tagline on The Dark Knight Rises, just wondering if you had considered using The Fire Rises ?
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Simply awesome stuff my friend !!! :D
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Excellent work m8.. love the different themes ;)
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Outstanding! Maybe decrease "A Christopher Nolan Film" on TDKR to the same size as the two others?
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Thanks guys.

I'll be uploading these as both a trilogy version (numbers on spines) and standalone versions.

Just need to work on the conversions...
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