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Post by xshoty »

very cool i love the color and the simplicity :) !
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Post by Arkflip »

I'm not a fan of the font used, i think you should try gotham or something similar.

I also think you should remove the spine image. Why don't you rebuild the retail spine (assuming you'll do the same for the back like you did on your recent work)?

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Post by venome »

Nice work on the front scene ;)
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I tried a bunch of sans serif typefaces (Helvetica, Akzidenz-Grotesk, Gotham, Gill Sans etc.) but they weren't working for me. So I tried a couple of different serif typefaces and finally settled on Baskerville, which I think works quite well.
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How would 'A Sean Penn Film' look at the bottom?
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Post by brunell »

JollyRoger wrote:
QUOTE (JollyRoger @ Jun 29 2013, 05:25 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
How would 'A Sean Penn Film' look at the bottom?


Not good. I tried that, and a tagline, down there but it just ruined the simplicity of the front. In fact, I'd rather drop it all together, than have it at the bottom.
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I'd leave it out then ;)
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Post by brunell »

This can be closed as I've basically finished the cover, just need to adress a few minor issues. Should be uploaded today, or tomorrow. Or the day after that. Definitely this week. :D
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