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yeah, of what you have 6 is best to add the shooter, but the original still looks best, can that be doctored and used suitably?
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Agree with the original been the best.
An alternative may also be great - n.º 6.
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Updated - almost there. Or not??

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I like it.. Have you tried a green BG behind the actor stills?
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Looks great so far! :D
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Look very good !!!! I love it ! But like salsa said try another color behind the stills the yellow doesnt work IMO
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Salsa wrote:
QUOTE (Salsa @ Jun 2 2013, 10:51 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I like it.. Have you tried a green BG behind the actor stills?


Yes. It results too much green. Maybe the yellow is too hard...
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Stalker wrote:
QUOTE (Stalker @ Jun 2 2013, 06:21 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Yes. It results too much green. Maybe the yellow is too hard...

:agree: Agreed. Tone the yellow down a bit. :)

Nice job on the shooting star. Perhaps you could curve the line trailing behind it?
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Your back cover looks great from the the features down Stalker - what do you think of this quick mock-up - extending your features panel up the way and work your text elements on that and keep the whole thing classy looking because i think the top part does not work for this beautiful cover :)

I can give you Dinosaur pics if needed. Disregard my comments if you disagree :P


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venome wrote:
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... i think the top part does not work...


I have the same feeling, that's why I wrote I'm almost there.
The front does not match with the back......
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