Star Wars I-II-III-IV-V-VI

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RookerDesigns wrote:
QUOTE (RookerDesigns @ May 22 2013, 01:10 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Been following this since the start. I do like where you're going with these. Cirus brings up a good point, and I think you should had more depth to these. I think your new TT is working also.

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Thanks for all the inputs. Here are some updated versions.


For this, I've added clouds in the background, gave Anakin and Tatooine a color overhaul, added some kind of sandstorm at the bottom.


Anakin got a yellow tint to go with the background that has been recolored.


Removed all purple in the background and retouched it with black color. Added some fire sparks. For both versions, I added some blue color just on the top of Anakins head, to make it appear as if the lightsaber is really there.


Change the wholoe color layout, removed alot of grain, added clouds, gave Luke some warm colors to mix in with the back.


Recolored a lot of Dagobah, fixed some errors I made when attached a new head to the body, added a lot of fog.


Added green color on the side of Luke's head because of the lightsaber, played with the colors and added a touch of white behind Luke.
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MUCH better!! Glad to see you're taking the time to do these right! An improvement in each instance!! :D :D :D
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Great improvements Falle.
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Post by Cirus »

Great upgrade!
If I have suggestions, you should replace the clouds at the Episode 1, something softer.
I think the New Hope background is too yellow, somehow been good between the original and the yellowish background, and you should add a little yellow light to Luke's right side.
And finally, you should work a liitle more Luke's head at Episode 5. (I think his head is too pink/red and need a little contrast.
However, these are superb fronts! :thumb:
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Love the updates... Much better.

I agree with cirus, and think the clouds on episode 1 are too strong. Less clouds I think.
And Episode 5, his head just looks weird, I know you cut and pasted it, but maybe bring along the neck that came with the head, might make it look more natural.
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Update!

Changed the clouds on I.


Lowered the brightness and light of II.


Played a bit more with the colors of IV.


Worked on Luke's head and recolored his outline on V.
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Getting better! :)
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yess much better buddy ! :)
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