Pixar Short Films

Post by **JollyRoger** » Sat May 18, 2013 12:24 pm

Looking great so far, V

Only thing that cathes my eye is '13 Sensational...' - too wide spread out. You should lessen the kerning some, and make sure the text isn't too large for the box.

venome · Post by **venome** » Sat May 18, 2013 1:47 pm

The box had moved a little - moved it back. I thought the spacing was ok, maybe it looked weird because it looking squished inside the box/blue panel?

Added some more characters and darkened the text, tweaked some other areas.

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Post by **JollyRoger** » Sat May 18, 2013 2:04 pm

Still think you should decrease the kerning a bit. But that's just me

venome · Post by **venome** » Sat May 18, 2013 2:07 pm

I'll give it a try buddy thanks

Post by **xshoty** » Sat May 18, 2013 2:45 pm

very nice bud !!! Maybe reduce a little bit the opacity of the bird shadow

venome · Post by **venome** » Sat May 18, 2013 3:21 pm

Will do m8

venome · Post by **venome** » Sun May 19, 2013 12:09 am

Some more done. '13 sensational' text more compressed also lighter bird shadow. Added Geri, stills and smaller aliens.

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Post by **xshoty** » Sun May 19, 2013 4:28 am

Nice job my friend !

Just two suggestion maybe make the sky a little bit more darker cause now it's too bright IMO, the other is i'm not sure about the position of your stills pictures...

Post by **JollyRoger** » Sun May 19, 2013 1:52 pm

I think you have room for an exta still?

Nicely done!

venome · Post by **venome** » Sun May 19, 2013 3:31 pm

Thanks guys, repositioned the text at the top and added high def text, will drop the stills a little, i don't think i'm done yet

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