Pixar Short Films

[nok]

I have to say the bigger title in BD's preview does look good for this cover
Maybe you can add the remaining characters on the back side?

[JollyRoger]

QUOTE (venome @ May 8 2013, 10:55 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>

Thanks BD.. i like the idea with the title lower down.. i was hoping to add Mike and Sully, or at least the yellow car - everything has to be quite small in the background so i can't see much more going on there other than the image that interacts with the spaceship.. and maybe some more birds.

I'm thinking perhaps the big blob is just that - too big, taking up valuable space where you could add other characters. If you're in love with that particular blob, perhaps shrink him, and have him placed to one side, where he can continue writing down the names of everyone involved, or whatever it is he's doing. In shrinking him some (in 3d terms, moving him further back) you can have characters both in front and behind him creating a nice scene. Just a thought bud

For me the size of the TT would depend on the space available. Seing this is a collection of short films, my guess would be you'd wanna add as many characters as possible (at least one from each film) somewhat limiting the size of the TT.

[venome]

I can try that thanks JR.. not a lot to work with but i'll see what i can do Worked on the lighting and added some birds and Mike. Hows the new light beam.. too much?

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[Skar]

really nice work on this one...
the shape of the beam seems fine, but the "dust light" around look a bit too much for me, the first version use to look a bit more realistic. but i guess the difficulty is to deal with the light blue background.

i've look in Google Image for "light beam" and mostly the beam are not so "dusty" and the edge of the beam either, i don't know what you think of it, but that might work better, make kinda sharper edge an beam?



PS: if the beam used is taken from an animated, just forget what i'd say,

[venome]

Lol, no i came up with it - i wanted to give the impression it was more than just a beam of light :P

[venome]

Is this working? (ignore the light beam)

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[xshoty]

Wow this is a very nice update here my friend ! Can't wait to see the back !!!

[nok]

Nice uodates. Nothing wrong with the light beam

[Bunny Dojo]

QUOTE (xshoty @ May 10 2013, 01:48 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>

Wow this is a very nice update here my friend ! Can't wait to see the back !!!

Agreed! You've really injected a lot of activity and humor into the design.

[Skar]

top work... again!!!