The Hobbit: An Unexpected Journey

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Maybe match the colors of the text with the tt some more?
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Not bad! :) However, the great image of Gollum on the back could still be "large and in-charge" without being large. Why not shrink his image to give the text breathing room and allow room for stills or more scenery of the cave?
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think JR's idea of some parchment use could work well for the specials and possibly the synopsis as well
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So, I will be honest, I forgot about this WIP. For JR and NR, I have tried avoiding the parchment/book thing just because it is done so much, I have never had it turn out well for me. I appreciate the suggestions, I just couldn't make it work like some of the better artists can. But I did do as Nike suggested, scale down Gollum a tad, which led to a little more breathing room on back. Added a few more effects, smoothed out the art to better blend, and I think I am ready to upload this bad boy.
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Like the update , but it's not my style a little bit more retails for me, but nice work on this :)
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Looks petty done to me. Only one thing. Maybe try align the right side of the synopsis?
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If you can work it out, id say try the title on top rather than on the bottom.
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