Star Wars THe Clone Wars

rajd3r · Post by **rajd3r** » Thu Mar 07, 2013 6:24 am

kernie82 wrote:
QUOTE (kernie82 @ Mar 6 2013, 10:46 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
LARGER FONT SIZE!!!

10 - 12 PT. for the synopsis and special features text!!

How many people need to suggest it before you make the change?!?! Your synopsis text is the same size as the (intentionally) tiny legal text. Try doing a test print to see how small it actually looks when printed, because it's often hard to judge such things by the way it looks onscreen!

Increase the size of the shape you've made for the synopsis, and then enlarge the text. The rest of the design isn't looking too bad, but I would recommend listening to the many many people who have suggested you increase the font size...

No problem

rajd3r · Post by **rajd3r** » Fri Mar 08, 2013 9:46 pm

What about this?

Post by **Matush** » Fri Mar 08, 2013 9:56 pm

It seems to me that everything is too close to the edge. Why all the text is in a different color?

Post by **JollyRoger** » Fri Mar 08, 2013 9:58 pm

It would be easier to comment on if I could see the whole back. It seems a little overlarge atm.

rajd3r · Post by **rajd3r** » Fri Mar 08, 2013 10:13 pm

Matush wrote:
QUOTE (Matush @ Mar 8 2013, 10:56 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
It seems to me that everything is too close to the edge. Why all the text is in a different color?

I know that color should be common or at least simillar - i'll correct it

JollyRoger wrote:
QUOTE (JollyRoger @ Mar 8 2013, 10:58 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
It would be easier to comment on if I could see the whole back. It seems a little overlarge atm.

In the next one "step" - i'll upload the whole back.
Thanks for comments.
/rajd3r

Zungam · Post by **Zungam** » Fri Mar 08, 2013 10:22 pm

The text size looks better now, but like JR said it's hard to compare it without seeing the whole back

As for the credits I think you should decrease the spacing between the words. Usually there's only 1 or 2 spacings between them.

rajd3r · Post by **rajd3r** » Thu Mar 14, 2013 7:39 pm

Ok, another update, but this is still not end - i want to add some "effects", but as for now i have no idea which one ...
Thanks for advices/replying
/rajd3r

Post by **JollyRoger** » Thu Mar 14, 2013 8:01 pm

You really need some free space around your text. It's much too close to the edges of your text boxes.

rajd3r · Post by **rajd3r** » Thu Mar 14, 2013 8:05 pm

JollyRoger wrote:
QUOTE (JollyRoger @ Mar 14 2013, 09:01 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
You really need some free space around your text. It's much too close to the edges of your text boxes.

No problem

Post by **Matush** » Thu Mar 14, 2013 9:20 pm

I agree with JR

and for me, all of the text on the back is one big mess.

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