Die Hard

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Part 3.

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Looks done to me :)
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JollyRoger wrote:
QUOTE (JollyRoger @ Feb 26 2013, 09:19 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Looks done to me :)


Apart from the spine TT, I agree.
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Cirus wrote:
QUOTE (Cirus @ Feb 26 2013, 10:39 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Post #88

sorry didn't see it...prefer it as in post 88, but the box is good too
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What do you think, the colon is necessary between the Die Hard and the With a Vengeance?
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No.
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No, but you forgot the "A" on the spine :D
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Post by venome »

Very cool though :)
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Post by Arkflip »

I've been looking for the backs and there's a few things i dislike. Only my 2cents on this, but i think you need to reduce the leading between the 1st and 2nd line of the back quote, and that orange isn't working. Not sure if a subtle drop shadow could work...

Can you switch the synopsis with the features? Features at the top and synopsis below? I think it could work better, and with a better features box, i really think that one isn't working.

Sorry for the negative feedback but you've done a terrific job with the front and the backs looks rushed and poor compared with the rest.
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No problem. I'll do my best.
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