Total Recall (2012)

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:agree: Try to make the hand a little larger. And may be you put some kind of reflection on the guy, maybe a reflection of the city, that no attract attention. or maybe it'a a dumb idea from me. :)
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Bisky wrote:
QUOTE (Bisky @ Jan 25 2013, 11:22 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
This is looking great mate. I have to agree with Salsa and NR though, something more relevant to the movie would work much better on the screen. The fella on it at the mo really isnt a big part of the movie.

looking forward to seeing your cover progress as usual wes.


Is something like this working guys?

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Looks real great Wes, but to be honest i think the hand is too small, by the looks of the distance from the head and the glas he puts his hand on.
The hand is equal now with is shin and top of his forehead.


Can't make his hand bigger, there are to many layers involved. Made his head smaller instead :)

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:agree: Try to make the hand a little larger. And may be you put some kind of reflection on the guy, maybe a reflection of the city, that no attract attention. or maybe it'a a dumb idea from me. :)


Tried the reflection but can't make it to look right.

@JR - i used Eras Bold for the font but it does look italic do you have a better font instead perhaps.
Tried several but none are working so far.

Update, not sure about the stickers but they are on the glass in the movie, so what do you guys and gals think?
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Superior skillz!!! :notworthy:
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Superb update. Just a suggestion, do a little bit transparent the smaller image as it was in the previous version.
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personally i dislike the stickers. other than that looks fantastic
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This is looking great!
Couldn't Eurostile LT Bold work for the names?
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This is looking great!
Couldn't Eurostile LT Bold work for the names?

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yesheman wrote:
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This is looking great!
Couldn't Eurostile LT Bold work for the names?


Will try that one, thanx bud ;)
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Changed the font, lowered the opacity of the message screen, removed the stickers and a couple things more.
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Awesome work with the screen, i like the new font bud :)
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