Rise of the Guardians

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I love the concept. It's a great start. :thumb:

I think I'm in the minority here, but the image of Jack Frost (I think that's Frost at the bottom?) anyhoo, the blue background just stands out a bit much for me. I know it's fitting, but all of the other images have similar dark style backgrounds. My eyes keep going back to the blue. Maybe I'm just nitpicking.. Or nuts. :yikes:

I like the gold tt, might look better if spine tt was also in gold?

Would it be overkill if you had a tagline or such at the bottom?
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Looks great EL. If you adjust the hue a little and increase the vibrancy the warmer Jack Frost image may fit in against the stronger colors around him :)

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Looks good....but think you could try getting Jack out of the TT. Might make him stick out more.
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good thoughts above mate, ripping start though :)
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Post by easylife »

thanks for the suggestions, tried them all out and heres where im at now

Killian wrote:
QUOTE (Killian @ Jan 9 2013, 05:02 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Maybe place Jack Frost to the left where the elves are and place Pitch under Claus?


wasn't sure what to use as the sixth image and went for elves over pitch to keep it in keeping with the avengers cover of having 6 heroes on the front
sauron wrote:
QUOTE (sauron @ Jan 9 2013, 09:49 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Very nice work so far - prefer the TT gold but I would make the actor names a bit smaller.


made a bit smaller
xshoty wrote:
QUOTE (xshoty @ Jan 9 2013, 10:14 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Nice start !! i prefer the TT gold , on the actor names think you add an effect of drop shadow, because it's a little bit harder to read and on the spine i think you put the TT gold too


spine gold
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QUOTE (wysmommy @ Jan 10 2013, 12:50 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I love the concept. It's a great start. :thumb:

I think I'm in the minority here, but the image of Jack Frost (I think that's Frost at the bottom?) anyhoo, the blue background just stands out a bit much for me. I know it's fitting, but all of the other images have similar dark style backgrounds. My eyes keep going back to the blue. Maybe I'm just nitpicking.. Or nuts. :yikes:

I like the gold tt, might look better if spine tt was also in gold?

Would it be overkill if you had a tagline or such at the bottom?


instead of a tag, thought id use the avengers critic quote
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QUOTE (venome @ Jan 10 2013, 01:52 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Looks great EL. If you adjust the hue a little and increase the vibrancy the warmer Jack Frost image may fit in against the stronger colors around him :)


adjust the colouring on jack and darkened the background around the quot
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QUOTE (Jpeg @ Jan 10 2013, 06:02 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Looks good....but think you could try getting Jack out of the TT. Might make him stick out more.

brought jack infront of the TT
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Post by Salsa »

Nice update EL.
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Post by JollyRoger »

Lovely! :D
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made a start on the back
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Post by xshoty »

Look very good !!! Nice start for the back 'm looking forward to see more :D
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