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While your image handling is top knotch (as always), I'm not so keen on this Indiana image. He looks a little bored with what he's doing?
(and to answer your Q, yes the background works... But I think a more sandy version would be even better. :)
I love the TT though! :thumb:
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I think it also is a little too green, and yes Indy look bored, and the whip is little odd to me.
What about this Indy image: http://hdwallpapersof.com/wallpaper/indian...paper-35135.jpg

The back and the TT are good as always. :)
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That link didn't work for me, but here's the Indy pic if ya want it, Tim :)

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I also think that the Indiana image is not the best and that the green grass background seems strange, specially compared to the other covers
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Post by Arkflip »

I have a lot of images for Raiders since the last Intersite competition. Lemme grab them and i'll let know what i have.
Everything looks great but honestly i think there's too much green compared with the others. I get the idea of the opening scene but i don't think it works now Tim.

Btw, any chance you can do an alternative version with the title Indiana Jones and the Raiders of the Lost Ark to match the others?
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Hmm... The back looks fine, but the keyart isn't really working. :chin: The background doesn't match the Indy pic (probably because he was running in the scene). How would the market background look?
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New background and larger/angled/differently treated Indy... seems like it works?

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Post by Matush »

In my opinion Tim , this is stunning. Works much better than previous version. great work again m8.
venome wrote:QUOTE (venome @ Aug 21 2012, 12:20 AM) Mat this stunning work m8, wish it were mine :P
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The new background definately makes it better, but I for one am still not overly fond of the Indy image, so sorry, Sir! :)
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Superb work! :)

The sky seems to be blending awkwardly with a bright edged cliff, though.
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