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Post by sauron »

JollyRoger wrote:
QUOTE (JollyRoger @ Dec 15 2012, 12:05 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Better, but the TT looks weird on top of the folded paper. perhaps drop the fold?

I was thinking the same, either lose the fold or put the TT below the fold.
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It reads wrong now, it no longer says django unchained
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Thanks guys, I rely appreciated you torts ;)
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better! Like the heads idea, but darken them some :)
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Have you thought about maybe having the chain break through the paper?
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Ty guys.
Sauron, have been working a lot on a broken chain, but can't get it to work, so this are the best result i could make so far. Can you explain you idea in details?
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Something like this JR? Not sure on the black text? maybe neat a little more color on them?
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I was thinking of something like this but obviously a million times better, I've just knocked this up in 5mins
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Hum, didn't work imho. Let's try something else - lose the floating heads, and try using a western city or landscape (something like the Arizona square mountain tops, dunno the right word) - a prairie scenario instead. That will keep focus on the two big bad-asses.
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I noticed a small defect, and the feet of the second person.
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