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Post by Salsa »

Tinted the Background a bit more.
Made an example with and without stroke! which one do you guys prefer?
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Without :) The yellow isn't really working. I think it's the greenish tone.
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definitely without.
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without for me also bud
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Well, I'm the odd man out here apparantly. I think the stroke works well on the TT itself, while the stroke on the yellow deffo does not! Make that text dark brown instead and save the stroke for something else! ;)
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thanks guys! I try JR's suggestion. ;)
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Post by Zungam »

Like it best without the stroke. Agree with nike about the yellow not working. Maybe black or white would work better?
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Good start, but I prefer to see the background in white or red. ;)
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Post by Salsa »

How about this idea? Not sure about the black color on actors.
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Post by JollyRoger »

I like the idea, noly the excecussion lacks somewhat. The paper doesn't really look real (very fake looking) and the black edge is jagged in places. I think you'll need to attend these problems in order to get it to work better. :)
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