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Started on this one. Haven't seen it yet, but look like it's going to be a great film!
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Lovely start!


perhaps tone down the red on the characters and move the TT up and away from them?
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What Jakob said! I think it's a good concept but i'd try the words without the stroke, less red and perhaps a more realistic tone on them.
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Hmm... When creating a cover for a western, I admit the first instinct is to add a leather/overlay. However, I agree with the above comments on realistic tones. Keep it up :)
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Ark. Did try the TT without stroke, like it better with! and I'll think it suits a western cover very well, son I'm going to keep it for now. The other stuff I'm going to work on. Thanks guys :jump:
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Think this is better, agree?
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lots better
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Agreed nice start bud :)
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Hmm... Don't think your last attempt works bud. Something between the first one and the last perhaps, or use the last one but with a moody sky instead of the leather. And I have to agree about the stroke, think it would look better without.
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have about centering the TT between the top and them boys?
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