The Hunger Games

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Post by Paris »

The layout looks finished to me :)

Although the poster campaigns have been overrun with fire effects, it does go well with the movie although I wouldn't know where to suggest any fire effects lol
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sky is still too yellow and green for me, sry bud :)
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I think you've nailed the front totally, I for one really get the feel of the movie from this! Tremendous!
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Looks finished to me! :thumb:
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Thanks for the response guys, as always that's very appreciated :cheers:

JR: I've toned down the green and yellow just a little. Won't go any lower cause I think it brings some atmosphere into the scene :)

nike: Yeah, I was playing with the idea of a wildfire in the background earlier, behind the front trees. My plan was to have the fire reaching the bottom of the pin from a few previews back and sort of going around it. Ditched the idea after some back on forth.
Made a preview for you with the fire, needs some more work though. Don't think it fits the scene now...
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Post by sauron »

I don't think the fire works - looks perfect in the previous preview although I feel something is needed on the right hand side of Jennifer.
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Yeah, that's been bugging me as well. Dunno how I'm gonna deal with that though... The characters spread out didn't look good.
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Sorry, the fire isn't working atm. I don't think you need the fire, looks great without.
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perfect without, 2nd post i've seen where someone thinks fire is important, have they seen the movie? Last Post really was perfect my friend.
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Post by sauron »

Have you tried it so Jennifer is to the right and then the bits in the background can be spread a bit more?
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