The Big Year

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Post by Droogs »

Really good start mate, Wes`s font for the names looks awesome. I`m not sure about the Owl stretching to the spine, just the back of the owl on the spine isnt really needed imo. I`d also keep the same colour for the TT making the spine TT white too.

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Looks fun, the way a comedy should! Isn't there a bear interactive scene with one of the guy's, he'd look cool lurking in the background, or am i on to a different movie?
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Post by Paris »

Maybe brighten up the curves on the sky and add some slight backlighting behind the characters? Also, the drop shadow on the TT looks a little awkward on the "Y". I think all front text could work without drop shadows.

Not bad so far, K ;)
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this is lookin superb! how about puttin nails through the screenshots so they look nailed on?

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Lookin good. A typo on the front, should be Wilson... not Wilsen.
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I think the eagle (or whatever birdy that is to the left) should be behind the B. And don't think you need the shadow from the backside bird.

Nice work so far!
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I think a boxed spine pic would go well underneath the TT
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