Why did I get married ?

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Thanks "Z"..
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Is the the synopsis set to 'crisp' ? make sure to turn that on; it'll make your text much more easier to read. ;)
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Looks like it's he preview that gives that effect
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Lools alot better now Jazzy and is comin along nicely. Is all the dark text on the back the same colour? The credits look black, if they are then i'd suggest makin all the dark text the same colour as the synopsis so that it flows better, or you could try the credits in white, they are very eye catching at the mo. dont forget to clone tyler perry off the question mark too. Also try shrinking the width of the synopsis a tiny bit, this way it wont be so close to the spine and it might fix a few of the big spaces in the middle of the text due to justifying it.

Look forward to an update.
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Text is all in grey.... and preview is not showing fine. Maybe it's because the credits are on pink ???

As for Tyler Perry on the title..... it's the movie title.

Tyler Perry's Why Did I Get Married ?
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According to IMDB, thats just the promotional title with "Why did I get Married?" being the title now. I think it`d look better without his name being on the front twice.

It may be because its a different font, even though it`ll be the same colour it`ll look darker, try an brighten it up a bit so that it matches the synopsis colour.

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lose the space between 'married' and '?', then add a space after the '?' instead :)
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OK...

Lost the space at JR noticed.

Place the synopsis colour on distribution.

...as for the title.... on original cover, it is as I put it.


This should be a wrap up.....

Thanks All for the help. Will be doing the sequel (Why did I get married too)
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Post by sauron »

You still have Tyler Perry's name on the cover twice, also how about doing something to the white background? Maybe some sort of texture?
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I forgot about this movie and was gonna say I don't know why did you get married lol :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
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