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would like comments on this please.

cheers pod666


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This preview is no good for WIP mate, you need a flat preview.
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Yup, it's hard to see when it's like that.

I'm not really sure what you want us to comment on... As far as I can see that's a poster with a slightly different background. There's nothing wrong in using official artwork, but maybe you should challenge yourself by making your own front from scratch? :)
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thanks ill edit now :(
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Not sure where you found this poster but the faces look skewed. I just did a quick google search and came up with a couple very hi res versions of this with no skewing. If you're going to use a poster I would use a nice one one!.. ;)

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cheers invisigoth point taken
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pod666 wrote:
QUOTE (pod666 @ Sep 27 2012, 03:02 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
cheers invisigoth point taken


Just uploaded the poster (1800x2150). Might be in unsorted till there's a category.

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hi i totally changed it with your advice thanks for input.

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I'm glad to see you're doing your own front :)

A few suggestions from me:
- The pic of the main dude on front looks a bit low res. And maybe it would look better if you made him red like the others?
- I like the red splatter/grunge. Maybe add more to the front?
- Flip the spine TT so it goes the other way.
- On the back I think you should decrease the pic some and make sure your synopsis doesn't overlap it. And the synopsis shouldn't be all capital imo.
- Maybe add some SF's if you got room for it?
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Agree with all Z`s suggestions.

I`d make the red background pic on the front bigger to fill some of the black.
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