Cloverfield

Post by **sauron** » Sat Sep 01, 2012 9:26 am

If you can try moving the head on the back to the right and maybe find a bigger synopsis or make it a few pt bigger.

wessim · Post by **wessim** » Sat Sep 01, 2012 11:44 am

Maybe give the legal part some color

something like this, just an idea

chefjoe · Post by **chefjoe** » Sat Sep 01, 2012 9:04 pm

This should do it, yeah...

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Post by **JollyRoger** » Sat Sep 01, 2012 9:09 pm

I think I prefer the TT as you had it in post #20.

Back side is shaping to be your best work so far in my honest opinion! Really great to see you trying something out of your comfort zone!

Keep it up, bud!

On the backside, let the synopsis be aligned to the quote above, especially in the left side. Looks a little squished right now.

chefjoe · Post by **chefjoe** » Sun Sep 02, 2012 1:56 am

how's this look...I too prefer this TT placement.

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Paris · Post by **Paris** » Sun Sep 02, 2012 2:02 am

Looking better! For the legal area, how about adding a dark green transparent layer over the green leather? Also how would the legal text look as a greenish/yellow?

One more thing :lol2:

I would try increasing the stills space by a lot. There isn't much happing in the top composition, so if you gave the stills a lot more space, you would have some more attention on the cool action shots!

chefjoe · Post by **chefjoe** » Sun Sep 02, 2012 2:46 am

Ok, not much room left now for re-arrangement...

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Nightrider · Post by **Nightrider** » Sun Sep 02, 2012 7:54 am

agree with JR this is one of your best joe

Post by **JollyRoger** » Sun Sep 02, 2012 11:29 am

I think the quotes on the front looked better up in the sky, bud

chefjoe · Post by **chefjoe** » Sun Sep 02, 2012 1:35 pm

yeah, i agree...

I'll fix prior to upload.

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