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JollyRoger
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I think you need to give it more darkness. Try adjusting their levels (the dark of the hair in between the women) - to the darkest shadows on Ms Liberty on the front.
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Ok, it looks better now Joe and i’m glad you decided to do something different. If you don’t mind, lemme be picky with you on this one 
• Remove the names, you don’t need them on the front, and that area will look better without the names.
• I like the quotes. Can you try to left justify them and then move them to the left near the title?
Here’s another idea for you, just in case you decide to test it. Worth a try i think.
• Bring the title for it’s original placement, and then add the tagline on the middle of the sky, above Ms. Liberty. Then use the big quote for the back where you have the tagline.
• Not sold with the font used for the synopsis. But if you wanna keep it expand a bit the margins, removing one or two lines of the text. Can i request a barcode on this one? It'll balance the space on the back between the images and the synopsis.
• How about a nice box for the features where you have now the stills? Another idea could be a rectangular side-to-side box for the features, adding a side-to-side row of stills, without the 3 strugges there.
Just ideas Joe, you decide
• Remove the names, you don’t need them on the front, and that area will look better without the names.
• I like the quotes. Can you try to left justify them and then move them to the left near the title?
Here’s another idea for you, just in case you decide to test it. Worth a try i think.
• Bring the title for it’s original placement, and then add the tagline on the middle of the sky, above Ms. Liberty. Then use the big quote for the back where you have the tagline.
• Not sold with the font used for the synopsis. But if you wanna keep it expand a bit the margins, removing one or two lines of the text. Can i request a barcode on this one? It'll balance the space on the back between the images and the synopsis.
• How about a nice box for the features where you have now the stills? Another idea could be a rectangular side-to-side box for the features, adding a side-to-side row of stills, without the 3 strugges there.
Just ideas Joe, you decide
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chefjoe
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I need to move the tagline on front up more, but I liked the TT on the side????
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do you think I should include the SF text in the perspectine window, or leave the same....
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do you think I should include the SF text in the perspectine window, or leave the same....
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