Star Wars Collection W.I.P.

[Matush]

ok, thanks guys.

I showed these three versions on different sites and most of the people are for a version of "C", me too.

Thank you very much, update soon.

[Matush]

so, update :

[attachment=22334:front_back_mini.jpg]

[chefjoe]

Not to be picky, but I LOVE this, and it's been far too long since seeing you here my friend!!!

[Zungam]

Looks smashing!

Shouldn't it be "A Galaxy Far, Far Away" insted of "THE Galaxy"?

Maybe bring some colors to the back as well?

[Matush]

QUOTE (Zungam @ Aug 26 2012, 08:23 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>

Shouldn't it be "A Galaxy Far, Far Away" insted of "THE Galaxy"?

You're right, I'll fix it, thanks m8


Here U go:

[attachment=22336:front_back_mini_v2.jpg]

[attachment=22340:back_1a.jpg]

worx now ?

[JollyRoger]

Great stuff, Mat! I think that Darth Maul's light saber should be longer.

[Arkflip]

I like it but being brutally honest with you, the back looks poor if we compare front and back. You've a stunning front artwork and then why such a plain back?

[Matush]

QUOTE (JollyRoger @ Aug 26 2012, 09:36 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>

Great stuff, Mat! I think that Darth Maul's light saber should be longer.

Fixed , thanks

QUOTE (Arkflip @ Aug 27 2012, 02:20 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>

I like it but being brutally honest with you, the back looks poor if we compare front and back. You've a stunning front artwork and then why such a plain back?

I'll see what I can do, but I would prefer to back was more poor.

[sauron]

Looking great but not sure the red box behind the synopsis works... Maybe try it a lighter colour to match the colours you've got across the cover already.

Maybe something like this...

[pietheinde26e]

Wow! Awesome job! I think Lucas Arts should hire you

Just a couple of things to make them even better in my opinion:

• I like Sauron's idea about the color of the boxes. The brwon/red looks a bit out of place.
• Maybe make those boxes a bit transparent? I think that way they'll become more a part of the entire cover. They'll blend in more.
• And a minor thing: it's A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away.... (add the word "in" and place an extra dot at the end). That's how it's shown at the beginning of every movie. You don't want a typo to ruin your cover

Great to see how a cover is made. It shows to me I have a long way to go...

Keep up the good and awesome work!