Star Wars Collection W.I.P.

Zungam · Post by **Zungam** » Mon Aug 20, 2012 9:10 am

Agree with NR!

Maybe move the shadow from the chasing space craft a little? Looks to me like it should be moved a bit down, so it matches the sun's placement better.

venome · Post by **venome** » Mon Aug 20, 2012 11:20 pm

Mat this stunning work m8, wish it were mine :P

Post by **Bunny Dojo** » Tue Aug 21, 2012 1:18 am

Nightrider wrote:
QUOTE (Nightrider @ Aug 20 2012, 04:50 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Man this is SO cool!
You have found a way to re-invent Star Wars covers

It's pretty darn astonishing!

For a series that's been done so many times (and done quite well several times), even knowing how good you are, I never would have expected to click and see something so vibrant and "new." This is very impressive!

I'd side with Felipe that you probably don't need the actors' names.

The other thing that could eliminate a little text is to just add a "I" (or II, III, IV, etc.) in the bottom-right area of your art instead of writing the whole Episode I. This might just me be unnecessarily moving things around, but I tried a quick mock-up and I think it might compliment that fantastic artwork you created pretty nicely --

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Arkflip · Post by **Arkflip** » Tue Aug 21, 2012 2:18 am

Not sure how i missed this but you've done an amazing work so far dude!

I'm with BunnyDojo, his idea seems better imo, including the spine text. My only concern is related with the different skin tones you have between the characthers. Obi-Wan Kenobi and PadmÃ© Amidala are too red when compared with the others.

RookerDesigns · Post by **RookerDesigns** » Tue Aug 21, 2012 4:09 am

you try centering them like this at all?

Post by **Matush** » Tue Aug 21, 2012 6:17 am

Thank you very much guys,

@ Tim m8,
Thank you very much for your valuable suggestions. Here I made three different versions, I can not seem to decide which is more suitable.

A
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B
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C
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ABC
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Arkflip wrote:
QUOTE (Arkflip @ Aug 21 2012, 03:18 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
My only concern is related with the different skin tones you have between the characthers. Obi-Wan Kenobi and PadmÃ© Amidala are too red when compared with the others.

Thanks Ark,
In the presentation of the "C" changed the color of Obi-Wan Kenobi and Padme ... better now?

RookerProductions wrote:
QUOTE (RookerProductions @ Aug 21 2012, 05:09 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
you try centering them like this at all?

Hey RP,

I thought about it at the beginning when I started this collection, but many covers already has a similar arrangement as you present above, and I wanted a little different.

Zungam wrote:
QUOTE (Zungam @ Aug 20 2012, 10:10 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Agree with NR!

Maybe move the shadow from the chasing space craft a little? Looks to me like it should be moved a bit down, so it matches the sun's placement better.

In the next update I move spacecraft down, sorry m8, I missed that it.

Arkflip · Post by **Arkflip** » Tue Aug 21, 2012 6:41 am

Version B for me Mat!

RookerDesigns · Post by **RookerDesigns** » Tue Aug 21, 2012 7:09 am

B or C for me

Nightrider · Post by **Nightrider** » Tue Aug 21, 2012 8:54 am

I kinda like B as well buddy

Sxxo · Post by **Sxxo** » Wed Aug 22, 2012 8:12 pm

Cool fresh design Matush

B for me.

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