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nikerun147 wrote:
QUOTE (nikerun147 @ Aug 16 2012, 07:04 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Not really getting the thriller vibe :(
I hope these suggestions help:

Front
• Maybe add Al Pacino to the front, and maybe stray away from the purple color scheme? I know you want to be different, but the bright purple isn't working.

* Toned the Pink/Mauve down.

• Also, how would the bullet look if it "hit" the TT? As long as the Glass is below the TT, I think it can still be readable.

* Tried it but, it loses it's self within the title.

Back
• You have some AMAZINGLY cool images on the back that could make a big action impact, but they have been brightened up and and separated (stills from top composition.)

* Tried suggestion but it looked too static and disjointed.

• Bring the synopsis down and combine the stills with the top composition for a big impact! :D I will look for more images if you like :)

* Have moved the synopsis down and also cut it down as it was originally made up from 2 synopsis. Feel it is better having the shorter version which is just the story line.
* Thanks for the offer of stills, but trust me when I say that I have everything from every known site, I'm a bit of a hound ;)

• The legal area is kind of messy at the moment :( but it can be fixed with a solid color background


* Taken the effect down slightly, making it more legible.
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Darksaber wrote:
QUOTE (Darksaber @ Aug 15 2012, 11:43 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Sorry stopped making stuff at CM while back due to real life issues, I am or was a resident artist there, but lost interest in making stuff, mostly TV series labels and a few, not many covers.

Sorry if I critique peoples work having never shown anything of my own on here :( but it's still available over at CM with the same username if you want to view it :)



... or you could just upload your works here. :yellow:
If you 'retired' what hold has CM on you? No disrespect on for their Exclusive policy, just wondering :)


Sorry GC for the off topic!

I really like what you have going on the back :) On the front your text, i.e. Actor's names are way too close to the edges. Move them inwards. :)

Great to see you becoming a more regularly visitor :)
Keep it up!
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GlobalCinema wrote:
QUOTE (GlobalCinema @ Aug 17 2012, 03:46 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
* Thanks for the offer of stills, but trust me when I say that I have everything from every known site, I'm a bit of a hound


I could upload around 90 hires images that Jpeg kindly found if you like?
My gallery: HERE
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Then I retract my statement , and I am not as much of a hound as I thought I was. 90, I like the sound of that, so yes I would love to take you up on the very kind offer.

If that would be too much of a hassle then point me in the direction of where I need to go and I'll do the rest.

Many thanks Nike
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That would be jpeg's site MovieGrafix GC. Send him a pm, and he'll set you up. :)
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Thanks for the heads up JR, that name rings a bell from the very far distant past.
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