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Uploaded the hires version in the gallery
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nikerun147 wrote:
QUOTE (nikerun147 @ Aug 15 2012, 08:40 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Uploaded the hires version in the gallery



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Sorry to be blunt but it's looking a little more s3x and the City than a gritty crime film.

It's not a criticism, just an observation
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Darksaber wrote:
QUOTE (Darksaber @ Aug 15 2012, 10:23 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Sorry to be blunt but it's looking a little more s3x and the City than a gritty crime film.

It's not a criticism, just an observation



Very nice to see more members sound their voice! :cheers:

When do we get to see your work, DS?
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JollyRoger wrote:
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When do we get to see your work, DS?

Sorry stopped making stuff at CM while back due to real life issues, I am or was a resident artist there, but lost interest in making stuff, mostly TV series labels and a few, not many covers.

Sorry if I critique peoples work having never shown anything of my own on here :( but it's still available over at CM with the same username if you want to view it :)
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I agree DB, it is different to anything else but that was my idea, i didn't want to go the same way as most. Never be sorry for voicing an opinion on my work, I tend to ignore most comments anyway ;)
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Update

Altered front text alignment.
Added a synopsis.
Changed banner pics on back.
Changed spine pic to include pacino.
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The Half Man on the front still bugs me! :)
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Not really getting the thriller vibe :(
I hope these suggestions help:

Front
• Maybe add Al Pacino to the front, and maybe stray away from the purple color scheme? I know you want to be different, but the bright purple isn't working.
• Also, how would the bullet look if it "hit" the TT? As long as the Glass is below the TT, I think it can still be readable.

Back
• You have some AMAZINGLY cool images on the back that could make a big action impact, but they have been brightened up and and separated (stills from top composition.)
• Bring the synopsis down and combine the stills with the top composition for a big impact! :D I will look for more images if you like :)
• The legal area is kind of messy at the moment :( but it can be fixed with a solid color background :)
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JollyRoger wrote:
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The Half Man on the front still bugs me! :)


My opinion is that it gives a natural depth of field and doesn't detract.
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