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Wow! It looks gret except the blind mice and the dragons don't make sense with the perspective
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nikerun147 wrote:
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Wow! It looks gret except the blind mice and the dragons don't make sense with the perspective



Thanks Paris, appreciated! :)

Better now?

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Much better :D
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Great cover so far.
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nikerun147 wrote:
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Much better :D



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Great cover so far.



Thanks guys.

Nearing the end of the front composition, if no one has any reckos? Can't think of more characters to add, 'cept the Frog King Harold, which I cannot find in his 'frog appearance'. :chin:

The grass at the bottom will be replaced...

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I love the character collage, but I have an issue with your background... it doesn't make sense to me. Your horizon on the left doesn't come close to matching your horizon the right, and the perspective on the castle on the left is inconsistent with the perspective of the kingdom on the right. If you need more explanation, just ask... :D
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kernie82 wrote:
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I love the character collage, but I have an issue with your background... it doesn't make sense to me. Your horizon on the left doesn't come close to matching your horizon the right, and the perspective on the castle on the left is inconsistent with the perspective of the kingdom on the right. If you need more explanation, just ask... :D



You're absolutely right, as you can see without the characters.

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I'll work on the background next. :)
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Is that one original image or something you created? Because it still doesn't look correct to me. :shrug:
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kernie82 wrote:
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Is that one original image or something you created? Because it still doesn't look correct to me. :shrug:



lol - it's just the above pic without the characters. I was just showing that you were right in your observations, thought you'd understand that by my last post.

And as I said - I will work on the background next. :)
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Sorry, I missed the little line below your preview that said that you were still working on the background.

I also thought that by showing your preview, you were trying to defend that your current background was correct.

It appears we still need to work on our communication. :D
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