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Post by JollyRoger »

Update, update, update!!! :bandance:
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Just didn't work with the stills up left, so tried something else. Also removed the new ship, but think I'm gonna add it in the far background beneath the stills.

Does it work like this?
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Post by JollyRoger »

Yup - better :) and in the right direction, and so on, and so forth...

I think you should cut off the left side of the stills at an angle to make it flow with the rest of the angled layout. :chin:
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Post by sauron »

Hmmm I honestly don't think you really need to have stills on this cover. Think the back works best in posts #66 or #71.
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Post by easylife »

Looking great m8. If you want to have stills, i like them in post 64, but id put all 3 in a line, just move the one on the left to the bottom under the two other stills, either that, or like sauron said, leave them off
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Post by venome »

Great stuff man. Stills are a personal choice, but for me.. if they don't add to the covers great look then get rid of them.
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Post by Nightrider »

I think the stills comments are right mate, this cover does not have to have them as it looks great and conveys the message of the movie perfectly without them.
However if you do want to have them I think do as JR said or as easy said,but in that case I would suggest 2 stills in the angled boxes instead of three would work better?
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Post by Zungam »

Yeah, think you guys have a point. All my attempts of adding stills haven't felt right, so think I need to go back to my first attempts :)

Thanks for your comments, guys. Most appreciated! Gonna wrap this up during the weekend.
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Stills gone and two ships on the back. Still need to finish the legals and the spine, but other than that I think I'm nearing the finish line. Any last comments or suggestions?
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Post by sauron »

Looking a lot better now mate :) How do the SF's look aligned to the right?
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