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While waiting to finish the Whiteout cover, i've done this... :whistle:
Things to do: a sky behind the car, colour match in screen bar, text adjustments, fire effect.
Toughts please.
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I'm liking this! :)

The quote looks hard to read in places, Perhaps add a darkening layer underneath?
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That image is perfect for a back composition :)

(As always) A few suggestions:

Special Features
• I don't think the transparent box is working with the black and white text. How would it look solid?
• I like the bolts in the corners man :thumb:

Synopsis
• The text might need some breathing room. I might look better without a box on top of the composition.

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• the legal area kind of takes too much attention. Try a grey color to keep the eye on everything else :)
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Great top image and stills design :)
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venome wrote:
QUOTE (venome @ May 28 2012, 04:30 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Great top image



:agree:

especially the central part :whistle:

Seriously, I like that, good tips from above :)
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delek wrote:
QUOTE (delek @ May 28 2012, 04:53 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
especially the central part

Me too :whistle:

Thanks for the kind comments and sugestions guys :)
I'll try those, but because of my poor english, i do not understand all.
For that i'll PM you Nikie.
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what they said mate :)
Superb design overall though :thumb:
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If you feeling courageous mate I rekon you could perhaps have the flames a bit bigger, have them licking the letters of the quote and perhaps ad a few sneaky white highlights to the quote for a little "poppy-contrasty-awesomeness"

Solid design, feels a bit unordered above the synopsis, play around a bit, good start! :D


Edit: perhaps change places of the box and the quote?
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i like the back so far :thumb:
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