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I like the peeing Matt Damon!
Made some adjustment to synopsis and added the SF

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Nice one there, yesheman! ;)
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That's cool bud ;)
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Awesome color treatment! If you could lighten up the bottom half of that back picture a little more, I think that'd look perfect. The other shots you've been choosing looked great too.

On the front, the mood is really well done, but the top 15% looks so sparse at the moment. If there's more to the image, perhaps you can move him up a bit? Or, what if you made everything a bit bigger? It might ruin the mood you've built, though. Hmm...

Also, have you considered removing that bar code on the back? :chin: :D
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Tim have give strong points about the images :)
I had only a suggestion: try to put Mattie Ross in some place... she's amazing in the character role.
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I'd put Hailee Steinfeld's name on the front since she's the real star of the film.
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I have tried out Tim's advice, I have increased Jeff and I have added Hailee..
Does it look okey, or does it look better with only Jeff on the front?

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V2 with matching skin tones :)

Also, try and make the TT "pop" more ;)
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Don't worry so much about the skin tones, as He's always red in the face coz of his drinking... ;) Also the light on her face looks real, and his face is in shadows under his Stetson hat.
I like version #2, but could you try fading out her legs (perhaps with some clouds/dust brushes blowing low against the ground she's trotting)?
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I prefer it just with Jeff. It makes for more iconic image, just a single figure agains the snowy background.
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