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Ok, so 2nd try on this.

Wanting to keep close of the retail colors red/beige/blue. I've also tried to get some hawaiian feeling as well, hence the pattern in the box.

Does the TT work like this? Perhaps I need some director's text also in the red box?

Just trying out character size/placement before improving on the image. Thx to the vman for this Clooney shot - it's way better resolution than anyting I'd managed to scrounge up ;)


Red version

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Green version

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Which is better?
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I think version 1! How about if the box was straight and not with the tilt?
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1st with more characters in the back :)
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Thanks guys. Red it is. :)



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QUOTE (nikerun147 @ Mar 28 2012, 11:04 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
1st with more characters in the back :)


Something like this Paris?

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Yep. Try and fit the other daughter confront of the older one if you can.
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3 kids must be enough :whistle:

Added director's text.

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Great layout bro! What do you plan to have in the background besides the sky?
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Great start JR!

What if you dis something like this with the flower?

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Good idea Brad. I'll try it out.

Here's an update. Can't decide whether this or the old TT is better?

Oh, and I'll add the kid sister too, soon as I've cut her out ;)

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Here's how it looks with the spine for now. :)

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I prefer the old TT personally... Also, maybe add some more saturation to the blue sky.
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