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Better?

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WAAAAAAAAY better ;)

try left-aligned rather than justified text to avoid holes in the synopsis.
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Even better, just play with the letter spacing to close up some of those holes.
Specifically, try and get the '(Matt' to spill over onto the next line, and tighten up the line beginning 'Despite their differences' so that 'determination' fits on it.
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I like the back layout but do agree with JR about the fonts.
I might suggest making the SF are a little smaller which would give the synopsis are a little more breathing room.

I like post 22 with the horses in the background, if they were a bit darker I think they would have some nice impact, and those characters are a big part of TRUE GRIT, it's not all Rooster :) But that does become a personal choice to have them or not.

UM WOW! I just posted and saw your update, looks really good! :thumb:
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Very nice update!
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I like the layout of the new update but not too keen on the image. Looks like he is having a wee.
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Can't wait to see that synopsis even better! ;)

Rest looks nice :)
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sauron wrote:
QUOTE (sauron @ Mar 29 2012, 09:01 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I like the layout of the new update but not too keen on the image. Looks like he is having a wee.

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sauron wrote:
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Looks like he is having a wee.

Yea LOL looks like he's the 'Elephant Man' with a big trunk! :lolboard:
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JollyRoger wrote:
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Can't wait to see that synopsis even better! ;)

Rest looks nice :)


Will change the synopsis, update later today!
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