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Made him smaller to fit the title better. Changed the color "from the director" to match Gerard Butler. Moved "Hope is... " up a little.
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I think it's better :arms: But the 'Director' text almost disappears in the new color. A little lighter for both 'Butler' and 'Director' and you're done imo. :)
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Maybe move the 'hope is the greatest weapon of all' tagline across so it finishes in line with the other bits of text. Then it wouldn't overlap his leg.
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Made the changes on the front. So here is what i have for the back.
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Looks really good!
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Post by Paris »

Nice job mate! A few suggestions:

For the stills...
• Switch the picture of Gerard with the picture of the children

For the legals...
• make them a dark grey (but not too dark) to make the Special Features standout more

For the quote
• make sure to mention the author under the quote ;)
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Paris makes some solid points, and only misses my first thought - the frames of the stills. A little too 'nice' IMO. How about re-using the ripped effect you've got going for the synopsis? Perhaps bust up the stills frames a tad like that?
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Great layout ;)
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This is looking really good!
Very good points above, I especially like JR's idea for the framing of the stills, I actually think a line of stills would look better here, but thats more of a personal choice I think.

I think you have put a lot of work into this and it's showing through :)
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Post by Droogs »

looks great Cal, I agree with the points from Nike and JR.

keep up the good work.
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