True Grit

[Paris]

QUOTE (edulopez @ Mar 22 2012, 11:17 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>

Ok, got it. Last time.

I didn't mean to come off strong mate But if you want to talk to a designer about changes you want personally, a pm is the way to go

[edulopez]

Dont worry, I didnt take it personally. :-)) Just got the idea, and that's what I will do next time.

[yesheman]

QUOTE (edulopez @ Mar 22 2012, 06:12 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>

I like it very much so far. And if it's possible, and you feel like it, of course, it could be great if you could do a second, bar code free, version.

I'm not a big fan of the barcode-talk... so please drop it, don't wan't to hear it in my threads. Yes, i can do without barcode for you haters, but next time send me a PM instead.

[JollyRoger]

QUOTE (nikerun147 @ Mar 22 2012, 09:30 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>

I didn't mean to come off strong mate But if you want to talk to a designer about changes you want personally, a pm is the way to go

It's quite all right Paris. You're not the only one to be very tired of the Barcode fight.! :jk:

In fact, I think I'll punish the next culprit severely! :Jason:

[Sxxo]

Cool start on the back.
Let´s see what you gone do on the top/empty area...

[yesheman]

Update. Does it work, or is it too much text?

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[Paris]

Hmmmm... I'm not sold on the back layout; it's too crowded I suggest keep the SF box the same and rearranging the synopsis/composition area with a lot less text

[JollyRoger]

red text in synopsis is way too hard to read. Use that font for quotes/tagline/TT only. Make synopsis in crisp serif font like Garamond.

[venome]

Agreed

[JollyRoger]

Correcting myself - seeing you have grotesque fonts on the front, a nice condensed Helvetica could be used for synopsis too