Machine Gun Preacher

Zungam · Post by **Zungam** » Thu Mar 15, 2012 6:03 pm

Janne has a good point. The ground is closer and should be less blurred. Other than that (and maybe loose the guns...) your last update looks really good.

Sxxo · Post by **Sxxo** » Thu Mar 15, 2012 7:46 pm

Agree.

jwshaw89 · Post by **jwshaw89** » Thu Mar 15, 2012 8:17 pm

I think you should flip the kids in the BG, and flip the dark orange bit across the bottom.
Keep Gerard the same, but move him towards the spine. Then have the TT/quotes the same place as they currently are, but on the right instead of left.

Just seems strange the kids running one way, and him going another. Light source is also left on them, but right on him.

Post by **JollyRoger** » Fri Mar 16, 2012 3:01 am

jwshaw89 wrote:
QUOTE (jwshaw89 @ Mar 15 2012, 09:17 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I think you should flip the kids in the BG, and flip the dark orange bit across the bottom.
Keep Gerard the same, but move him towards the spine. Then have the TT/quotes the same place as they currently are, but on the right instead of left.

Just seems strange the kids running one way, and him going another. Light source is also left on them, but right on him.

... or just flip Butler!

btw I should think he uses his right hand to squeeze the trigger, which makes it even more logical to flip him! :chin: :thumbsup:

calinutzuu · Post by **calinutzuu** » Fri Mar 16, 2012 10:48 am

Update? Better?

nok · Post by **nok** » Fri Mar 16, 2012 11:20 am

Great update. The new TT is much better

Zungam · Post by **Zungam** » Fri Mar 16, 2012 11:56 am

Post by **JollyRoger** » Fri Mar 16, 2012 12:39 pm

I think the TT is squished out there. Make Butler smaller to make more room for the TT (which looks much better! - How would it look if you had 'From the....' in same color as Butler's name?)

Sxxo · Post by **Sxxo** » Wed Mar 21, 2012 10:19 am

lorbedav · Post by **lorbedav** » Wed Mar 21, 2012 10:58 am

Very, very nice work!

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