Machine Gun Preacher

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Post by euroboy »

Sweet stuff as usual! Real bad-a$$ feel that makes me want to see this. Is it any good?

A couple of thoughts then... :)

Let me see, yeah, I agree about the hand and gun. Maybe they're a little big? Or I don't know.

What I do know, and this is me being picky, is that you need to slightly adjust the kerning on some letters in the title treatment. Look at the space on both sides of the second "E" in "PREACHER" for example. Other than that, brilliant typo as always!
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Post by venome »

The machine gun is fine. Hope you continue with the hair detail and that you soften the blending on the background where it goes from dark to light on the left.
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euroboy wrote:
QUOTE (euroboy @ Mar 15 2012, 05:45 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
What I do know, and this is me being picky, is that you need to slightly adjust the kerning on some letters in the title treatment. Look at the space on both sides of the second "E" in "PREACHER" for example. Other than that, brilliant typo as always!


Agreed :agree: Brill spot on those letters David - I didn't even notice myself! :yikes:
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Post by samppa »

So, the last update for today :)
Adjusted the kerning and tried to fix the hair, any better?

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Post by sauron »

Looking great! Nothing to add...
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Post by yesheman »

That my friend, is looking awesome :)
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Post by Nightrider »

It is looking really good, maybe we could see a little more definition of the bottom part of the arm that is holding the gun ?
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Good stuff! :arms:
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Real sweat Samppa :)
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