Machine Gun Preacher

euroboy · Post by **euroboy** » Thu Mar 15, 2012 4:45 pm

Sweet stuff as usual! Real bad-a$$ feel that makes me want to see this. Is it any good?

A couple of thoughts then...

Let me see, yeah, I agree about the hand and gun. Maybe they're a little big? Or I don't know.

What I do know, and this is me being picky, is that you need to slightly adjust the kerning on some letters in the title treatment. Look at the space on both sides of the second "E" in "PREACHER" for example. Other than that, brilliant typo as always!

venome · Post by **venome** » Thu Mar 15, 2012 5:29 pm

The machine gun is fine. Hope you continue with the hair detail and that you soften the blending on the background where it goes from dark to light on the left.

Post by **JollyRoger** » Thu Mar 15, 2012 6:34 pm

euroboy wrote:
QUOTE (euroboy @ Mar 15 2012, 05:45 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
What I do know, and this is me being picky, is that you need to slightly adjust the kerning on some letters in the title treatment. Look at the space on both sides of the second "E" in "PREACHER" for example. Other than that, brilliant typo as always!

Agreed

Brill spot on those letters David - I didn't even notice myself! :yikes:

samppa · Post by **samppa** » Thu Mar 15, 2012 7:46 pm

So, the last update for today

Adjusted the kerning and tried to fix the hair, any better?

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Post by **sauron** » Thu Mar 15, 2012 7:47 pm

Looking great! Nothing to add...

yesheman · Post by **yesheman** » Thu Mar 15, 2012 10:09 pm

That my friend, is looking awesome

Nightrider · Post by **Nightrider** » Thu Mar 15, 2012 11:27 pm

It is looking really good, maybe we could see a little more definition of the bottom part of the arm that is holding the gun ?

Post by **JollyRoger** » Fri Mar 16, 2012 2:16 am

Good stuff! :arms:

Post by **M0vieM0nster** » Fri Mar 16, 2012 4:58 am

Sxxo · Post by **Sxxo** » Wed Mar 21, 2012 10:22 am

Real sweat Samppa

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