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I agree about the skin tones :) great work so far m8 ;)
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This may be a little late, but the synopsis is a little too big. How would it look shortened with a quote?
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Bisky wrote:
QUOTE (Bisky @ Jan 22 2012, 10:34 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
sorry havent posted back, yes the the background of the synopsis looks so much better now.

As for "eclipse", is that the same pic of the girl on the back as on the front? if so I`d use a different pic and also remember to always match the skin tones, otherwise it looks strange that on one pic shes as white as a ghost but on another shes got a healthy tan.

keep goin, these are shapin up nicely. ;)


The Bela picture is not the same as on the front, but I tryed to make some changes to make it not so strange (result below)

nikerun147 wrote:
QUOTE (nikerun147 @ Jan 23 2012, 04:30 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
This may be a little late, but the synopsis is a little too big. How would it look shortened with a quote?


I thinked about it, but I dont know where to put it...

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