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Uploaded some artwork for you wes; one has a better TT - along with a sheriff's star. Go chk it out ;)

http://www.hirescovers.net/forum/index.php...sc&cat=6009
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This is looking good wes!

I wouldn't worry too much about the lighting and shadows on this one, as Luke's lighting is completely different from the others, and I don't see any options to make them the same. One suggestion from me would be to drop the intensity of the shadows as they move further from the bodies.

Everything else looks great!
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JollyRoger wrote:
QUOTE (JollyRoger @ Jan 16 2012, 05:13 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Uploaded some artwork for you wes; one has a better TT - along with a sheriff's star. Go chk it out ;)

http://www.hirescovers.net/forum/index.php...sc&cat=6009


Thnx Jr i appreciate it :)

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QUOTE (bpmford @ Jan 16 2012, 06:23 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
This is looking good wes!

I wouldn't worry too much about the lighting and shadows on this one, as Luke's lighting is completely different from the others, and I don't see any options to make them the same. One suggestion from me would be to drop the intensity of the shadows as they move further from the bodies.

Everything else looks great!


wil do.

Update soon!!
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So after some work on Jolly jumper incl. a head transplantation this is how it looks.

Worked on the bulletholes but didn't like the look of the smoke, worked on the edges though.

update!! will work some more on the font of the tt added the star to it (thnx JR)
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worked on the tt font and on the perspective.
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I haven't heard of this one, is it any good? This cover is certainly making it look great. :)

What if you were to move your characters down a tiny bit and put the title up top? Then, you could do a couple of cool things, like having his head cover a little bit of the title or having your sun burst through the bullet holes in the title treatment. :)

Right now, the color and texture has it getting a little lost in the grass, and it's drawing a lot of attention to where his feet meet the ground.

Nice work as always. :)
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Works better like this (TT) - but I'd like to see BDs suggestions :)
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well this is how it looks after Mr BD's suggestion ;)
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Hm, this makes LL look too big in comparison to the others. Also text and TT placed too high. Perhaps shrink LL some and move the text downwards accordingly?
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Sorry don't know the movie Tim.
I wanted to make a western cover bc i didn't do one before and than i came across this movie.

Update!

thnx to Voetzoeker for the original movie font ;) oh and the perspective tutorial was great to learn thnx buddy.
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