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Been a member for a while but first WIP methinks so be kind! :)

Saw this film a while back and thought it was great, been outa the game for a long while so this is a tentative start but nothing set in stone.

Stayed away from the poster art but tried to keep a similar theme, not sure it works yet.

Some things to note.
Havent blended the screens yet.
Not sure on the fonts used or background.
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Loved this movie and thought Gleeson was brilliant!

When it comes to the cover, I have to say I don't like the background you've used. Why have you chosen a brick wall btw? Can't remember any huge brick walls in the movie... Think it would work better with a subtle texture, maybe in blue?

I like the bulletholes in the TT, that's your work right? Reflects the movie very well.
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Thanks for the reply :)

I chose the wall for a background because of the end scenes where they are along the pier in the final showdown but can be changed of course, i tried various textures but couldnt find one i liked, i'll keep the brick for now but will look out for something else that may fit better.

Yep bullets were added onto own TT by me.

Done a quick mock up with a slightly altered back to see if it works any better, same wall for now though as i was doing this as you posted :)
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Make sure to center the synopsis and go with a smaller size. :)


PS: Great to see you ULAM - been awhile! :thumb:
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Hi JR yes been ages mate :)

Ok slight update, better,worse same?

No0t sure about the stills and there placement yet though.
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Woa :yikes: A monstrous synopsis! Can you find a shorter (or shorten it yourself), then lose at least a pt size-wise.
Also move it inward till you have 30-40 pixels worth of free space on each side.

Looking forward to see this comedy! Just watched the trailer and ROFL!
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Lol I thought I'd make a double play DVD where you get to read it as well as watch :D

I'll shorten the synopsis if it's too big, never been quite sure of font or px size for those.
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Cool start ULAM, i would personally remove the drop shadow on cheadle and Gleeson from the front. It makes them look pasted on and if thats not there it will look more natural. :)
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ULAM!! great to see you posting a WIP here!

Nice looking cover so far buddy!

One redo I have would be to frame the screens box a bit so it doesn't look like it is meant to be part of the main image on the back, but a cool effect with it.
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Thanks lcd and bpm :)

Ok another slight change, dont think the screens were working where i had them so have them separate now.
also added the Irish flag to the TT does it work or just keep it white?
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